This was intersesting. But it wasn't really..complete..if that is the word I am looking for. Its good..but it dosen't explain. People will probably have a great deal of questions after reading this story. It needs some work. But it is a good story.

Wow. That was amazing. Sugoi.

Wow! Truly impressive work. That was very sad, a nice angsty short story. _ What characters from Nintendo were they?

That was soooo sad! But I liked it _

wow. this was absolutely beautiful. you should write more stuff to put on is amazing.

The title caught my interest and I was impressed. The imagery and metophors were amazing.

awwww... that was really good. i like how in the end he asked her not to go. so dramatic. very nice. it leaves this wondering feeling after u finish reading it. i think u should leave it like this.

That was so sad... Poor Princess and Prince. I was beautifully written I should say. Better than anythin I could ever write hehe! So I give this story 5 gold stars! OH and Irah called you sis, so if you are her sis does that mean that you are my sis too because Irah is my sis? hehe I guess so! Keep on writing! Love, Sakura-Chan aka Jen-Chan

hmmm... good job, even if the characters _are_ nameless (which i hate .)

write more! a bit confusing, but i think i get it, so MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

that was so good. I loved it!

Coolness. I liked this. Very nicely written. Good job.

Lana-chan, even though I've read this fic before you posted it, I'm compelled to review. I'm glad that you did finally post it, and thanx so much for the dedication. This fic was very heartfelt and emotional, I loved it. I hope you write more and I can't wait for your Kenyako fic to be finished. Love always, k, Sis? ~Irah~