Reviews for Laments of Dew
HarleyNoir chapter 1 . 8/27/2020
This is beautiful!
Octavio chapter 1 . 8/26/2020
Love poetry is what first got me into poetry in the first place, so I kind of feel a special connection to them. While I would've structured some of the lines and phrases differently, I enjoyed the couplets and the feelings you conveyed. I know how you feel. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Good job!
Melody of the Stars chapter 35 . 4/12/2020
This is beautiful- it made me cry as did the others, but this is still very beautiful nonetheless.
Melody of the Stars chapter 25 . 4/12/2020
These poems are very sad, but also still very beautiful.
Melody of the Stars chapter 7 . 4/12/2020
Welp, I'm crying again. This really just... it touched me in so many ways, on so many levels...
Melody of the Stars chapter 4 . 4/12/2020
This was so beautiful too, oml! And the imagery- I could see it all happening in my head- just beautiful.
Melody of the Stars chapter 2 . 4/12/2020
This last bit was very beautiful- and in turn it made me cry more. You, my fellow writer, have broken this heart good.
Melody of the Stars chapter 1 . 4/12/2020
Damn, this made me cry. I just recently told my crush how I felt about him and he doesn't feel the same way about me as I do him and... well, let's just say that this poem really struck something inside of me- in a good way.
Rebecca chapter 1 . 4/6/2019
THis is beautiful, could be written by own soul, desperate for love of a friend. Knowing I won't take the risk. Truly wonderful writing.