|Reviews for Equinox|
| Mislav chapter 1 . 5/17
Such a beautiful, lovely haiku about spring. Gorgeous visuals and excellent attention to details. You said so much in just a few lyrics. My favorite part was: "Spring lanterns shine bright, warming the waters and fields, leaving mud behind
Spring clouds fill the sky, lingering winds blows pinwheels, the maidens defrost"
Keep up the great work. I really enjoyed this.