|Reviews for Bride at the Bar|
| Dr. Sonnet chapter 1 . 5/7/2019
Nice story- good job building up suspense- my only advice would be, however cliche it may seem, show not tell. Try to illustrate the story as much as you write it. Very nice piece of work- I am looking forward to seeing more chapters if you choose to.
| The Spectacular SpiderDom chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
Aww, what a nice gift. ;)
Nice to see that Jennifer turned around.
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 3/31/2019
That was a nice gift. I'm glad Jenny came through again. Two barefoot ladies helps too.