| Reviews for Bride at the Bar |
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   Dr. Sonnet chapter 1 . 5/7/2019 Nice story- good job building up suspense- my only advice would be, however cliche it may seem, show not tell. Try to illustrate the story as much as you write it. Very nice piece of work- I am looking forward to seeing more chapters if you choose to. |
| The Spectacular SpiderDom chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 Aww, what a nice gift. ;) Nice to see that Jennifer turned around. ~SD321 (SpiderDom321) |
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 3/31/2019 That was a nice gift. I'm glad Jenny came through again. Two barefoot ladies helps too. ~Sir Scott |