I feel like some ofbthe things said were a little too "movie-like" and a bit less realistic, but nonetheless this was really cute.
I didn't really expect the story to go that far, I must admit, I mean I knew its rating, but I wasn't sure if it was implicit or explicit. Well, I found out, lol.
But I could really feel the emotion put into this story, and the characters' feelings were very heartfelt.

I'm in the middle of your story , are they lesbians?