Nothing like getting bitch slapped to throw you off your game... It really hurts to get stomped out of nowhere, that I do now.

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I’ll be reading this one as I write my own story. If you want, why not give it a look in return? I’d be appreciated if you or any of your readers would like to read my work. Any newcomer who reads my story is welcome.

Really liking the character of Theo. Things have changed but the love between brother and sister is still there...

It's easy to see all the mixed feelings that they both have but It makes me all the more fearful about how this may end.

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I will say on one thing, he didn't go right into the mindless denial thing that you'll see in movies and TV shows.

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Nice way of rewarding readers of Legend of the Dark Oracle here, it all ties in well. Great stuff!

A poignant and emotionally driven reunion. All in all I loved this chapter, keep up the good work!

Sasha just has to tell him that she's a superhero... but not at all.

Still, nothing is more painful then home.

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Well, fuck... that left me feeling a bit bitter.

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Interesting so far, I look forward to learning more about the dynamic between Sasha and Theodore. Keep up the great work!

Short, sweet and to the point. It leaves you with a question... What did Sasha get into this time?

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