Reviews for A Dark and Heavy Weight
Cloudcrushed chapter 1 . 7/29/2019
Finally, I had the time to check out one of your short stories and this one is beautifully written. Something about your choice of words is so... poetic and satisfying to the eyes. Good job.
lirianstar chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
SHIVERRRRR

Holy shit, this was so, soooo sinister. The narration was intriguing, and the subtle clues had me hooked. Even though the ending was clear - the way it happened was so messed up.

Great story!
vbutterflyv chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
I really enjoyed this! By the end it almost felt like "I too" knew what happend there... So am I the reader also stuck in that house? Kind of fouth wall breaking?

It was a little simplistic but it added to it I think.
Reminded me of a short goosebumps story.

Very good! A