It almost seems to be kind of fanfic over royal. Somehow the realities are not handled and in places it feels like artificial.
..And moreover why I am getting a feeling that the authors were thinking of one real royal family (ex royal) pair while writing part of this..

Daughter in law ordering mother in law..That wouldn't even sit well with normal families. How come royals Queen is able to accept that I wonder..!

Building relationships amidst trust issues..That is hard. You just can't get over with a simple thought or action.

It is in our believe system that we are supposed not to let the dogs in the living rooms.

This was a lovely read! I couldn't put it down! Finished it in one day and would LOVE to read books 2 & 3 in the trilogy! I hope you do publish them, and I am very much looking forward to reading more of your works!

Oh my goodness. I cried I laughed so hard.

I read this story again today. Looking forward to the sequel.

aha. I see it maybe working now. OK.

Oh no. This...is not...shaping up to be...what I thought it was...

...uh-oh uh-oh uh-oh.

uh-oh, now I know who Nova hit...

You're bouncing around in tense. It seems like it's supposed to be past tense, but a lot of the exposition goes into present tense. Fix that maybe?

Otherwise, this is a fantastic story so far!

So, wait. Where could we read a King's Heir then?

I really like the book and the main characters. Really excited to read the sequel. pls uplod the sequel, can't wait

I would love to see the King's Heir and the King's Crown. I really enjoyed the ending to this book. This story had a very beautiful ending. Now, that we've reached the end of part 1, it should be interesting how you two figure out how to continue the story. Great job.

Great work you guys. I love this story. Excited that it's a trilogy :)