|Reviews for Avalon|
| LucyRowanVictoria chapter 3 . 1/30
This chapter is broke, Fantasy Ocean. Is it fixable?
| LucyRowanVictoria chapter 2 . 1/30
Powerful. Primal. Brutal. That would about sum up this chapter for me. And, in case you were wondering, no, still not disgusted by anything.
I am, however, a little confused about the whole "clutch" thing. Does a clutch denote blood relative like sibling, or is it more an organized unit?
| ElvenValar chapter 2 . 8/15/2019
| ElvenValar chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
| LucyRowanVictoria chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
Well, as much as I hate to say it, I'm not that creeped out yet. I'm not even grossed out, which a lot says more about me than it does you, Fantasy.
Overall, an excellent first chapter. Just enough balance of explanation and mystery too catch one's interest. Can't wait for the next chapter!