Reviews for Edelweiss The Warrior Druid
LDF chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
The prologue feels more like an appendix. It doesn’t necessarily have a very engaging hook. It does what a lot of fantasy stories on this site sadly do, which is infodump on the history of a particular culture or race. There's no need to set all this up in the beginning, especially since most people would just gloss over it to get to the actual story. Just introduce the characters and conflicts at the start, and weave your worldbuilding as you do so. Remember to show, not tell.