|Reviews for Broken|
| Ainu chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
Beautiful poem, and you did an excellent job of conveying anguish without making it sound like cheesy teen angst. Beside that, it's a poem about someone who's hurting and the compassion the speaker has for him.
I think too many love poems are about the pain of the speaker - not that that's bad, but poetry that's speaking about another is refreshing.
| Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
Oh good, it is nice to occasionally find someone on FP who can use English successfully in an artful manner.
Nice imagery, I enjoyed it.