|Reviews for Home|
| The DarkCat chapter 1 . 9/12/2019
the words in here are very truthful, I loved how realistically and piercingly this poem spoke. The emotions were greatly executed in this, astonishing... Thank you for sharing.
| Mercury Angel II chapter 1 . 9/2/2019
Hi, I like your poem! This reminds me of leaving childhood behind and going into adulthood! Just think of it as a life experience worth learning! Thank you for writing this poem! Please keep writing!
| Woedin chapter 1 . 9/2/2019
A most moving offering, your words very much illustrate to me that long ago day for me that I departed my cherished home. Your poem is filled with visualizations of a time one could be contemplating taking leave from the nest of their childhood. The imaginings of going forth into the wide open world full of unknows and adventure. While also pondering those fondest memories. You unveil the understandable trepidations all most everyone feels at that life changing decision to set out on their own. ~ A very touching read, I thank you for writing. This truly put me in minds of a classic Beatles tune "She's leaving home" ~