Reviews for Star Gazing
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/7
Your writing feels sincere and earnest. I like the line that says You, me, that's plenty. One thing that I think would make your poems a little more impactful is not using the same words. Like... darkness, shining and stars were used at least twice. It would push creativity to find other ways to express those same nouns. But then again it may be just me. Keep writing!