|Reviews for The Beginning|
| Kriss Sprinkle chapter 1 . 11/14/2019
If you have more of the story developed I would be interested in reading more. I was drawn in to the mystery of the unsolvable problem for Umi and Varian, then quite abruptly learned it was Aeron.
| Bookwormgirl64 chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
Interesting. I like reading different myths of how the world supposedly began. :)