|Reviews for A Warning Unheeded|
| R.C. Wulfe chapter 1 . 2/16
Oh I adore this premise and using the "fae" was pure genius. I really enjoyed the rhythm of this poem along with it's very apt message.
"Beware your walk
for while oft fair of face, rare are they fair of heart."
This was a poignant ending line.
I enjoyed the formatting patter of Normal Font followed by Italic Font but was mildly thrown by the sudden use of bold for the line that drew the poem together. However, not enough that it in any way truly detracted from my enjoyment of the poem as a whole piece. All in all, lovely!
| The DarkCat chapter 1 . 9/23/2019
I liked the ending the atmosphere set here.