|Reviews for When I Saw What I Wasn't Supposed to See|
| zagato chapter 4 . 9/27/2019
This is wonderful, thank you!
| julianmarq chapter 3 . 9/24/2019
Not bad, though maybe you could use fewer dialog tags. As for the story itself, I feel like they resolved the issues a bit too fast.
| julianmarq chapter 1 . 9/24/2019
I'm really liking how this is written. A bit of beige prose and the pacing is fast, but I like it and damn that twist I was not expecting.