Reviews for The Vampire's Mistress
Migsy chapter 5 . 11/5/2019
Omg omg omg omg. Yesssssssssssssss.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/4/2019
omg noo ari! :(
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2019
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2019
Loving this :D
Migsy chapter 2 . 10/30/2019
Yay for update! A few typos but overall good! So steamy
Guest chapter 2 . 10/29/2019
omg i love this! please keep going with it it’s so good!
BadReputations chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
Well, a few things. Is this a universe where vampires are well known to exist or will this be explained later why a maid of 3 weeks knows her boss is a vampire.
Second, theres a few grammatical and spelling errors and you may want to edit them out.
But, over all i like it! You were a little heavy enphasizing the vampire angle, maybe try to mix in innuendo since we are all aware of what he is and have the context to understand it. But well written and i like ariannas character very much!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
Very good story, I think you are headed in the right direction with it.
Keep going I believe it is going to be a great story.
Misgy chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
Yes please! Sounds intriguing! Post more!