|Reviews for Fake|
| cassi crysta chapter 1 . 1/16
last line- the second "them" is unnecesary (can never spell that right) in my opinion. jarred me out of the mood the poem had struck. great message here.
| Synthey chapter 1 . 10/16/2019
You've looked at the subject from so many angles and elaborated on these aspects with impressive care, the beginning was very relatable to be honest, we see people do that a lot and I'm also a bit curious about the ending, of the change you can make in someone who chose to put up that wall, or facade... overall great writing, I applaud the strategic use of full stops to set the tone!