|Reviews for Daughter of the Forest|
| Alyce Reide chapter 1 . 11/1/2019
This is a really nice story so far! No plot holes yet. ;). I have noticed a few spelling errors, though...
I don't know what the rest of the story is like, but if it's at the same level as this you could probably hire a professional editor and publish!
| i'm sherlock chapter 1 . 10/21/2019
Loved this first chapter! You have nice, descriptive but light prose and have done a good job introducing this world to the reader through the characters that inhabit it. Kathlyne is a likeable protagonist, and though this is a gentle beginning, I didn't get bored once. The work you put into this is evident!