Reviews for The Terminal Cycle
Mislav chapter 1 . 1/12
Pretty interesting and intriguing story. I can't imagine jumping from one timeline to another, starting with the future after I've died. That's gotta be terrifying. You described the change of timelines pretty well, as well as Marcus' initial confusion. He sure handled those thugs well. I especially liked your depiction of the distant future, though that hunt for the alligator seemed like a fun scene :) I assume the story started sometime in the past, because the "first" future seemed more like (our) present day. That was a great twist. I also liked how the story ended on an optimistic and thought-provoking note, with Marcus addressing the reader directly. Keep up the great work. You are very talented.