|Reviews for My Mom Love's me Alot|
| A Lovestruck A2 chapter 1 . 10/29/2019
Hello, DPLxStrife here doing some reviewing around the site, hoping to give out some proper constructive criticism to help out fellow writers here. With that out of the way, let's get started.
For starters, your title should have proper grammar. Alot is not a word. And Love's does not need an apostrophe. The proper title of your story should be, 'My Mom Loves Me a Lot'.
There are a lot of randomly capitalized words and grammatical errors all over this. You really need a beta reader to go over your work. This needs it. Badly. This isn't meant to be harsh even though it may come off that way. My recommendation? Find yourself a solid beta who can make this into something much more readable.