|Reviews for Dominic and the Sea|
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 1/14
This is a well written story. I'm glad Dominic was able to save the village. I felt sorry for the whale though.
| ToastedTruffle chapter 1 . 11/4/2019
Have you looked at the formatting, or is it just me seeing "p class"MsoNormal"span style"font-size: 12.0pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: 'Times New Roman',serif;" before every new line of text?
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