|Reviews for Essay about human savagery|
| hellomynameisv chapter 1 . 5/6
This is an interesting insight into humanity. I've never really thought about all of that before.
Though, the line, "Question is: on top of who this human instinct will make us go to get it according to our own needs?" is honestly kind of confusing. A suggestion would be to rephrase it to, "Question is: On top of whom will this human instinct make us go to get that?" *raises hands in innocence* It's just a suggestion; you don't have to use it.
Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and don't worry too much about English not being your first language, 'cause your English is phenomenal.