Reviews for Vigilante
Katherine Queen chapter 71 . 5/21/2020
Surprisingly, wasn't expecting the story to end quite this way. Not, to say I was expecting a trial at the very last chapter. Still, it was quite interesting how Kamau had set up the arrest with Pandora. Greatly enjoyed this story. I will admit, 68 & 69 weren't my cup of tea, 69 especially, but I will admit that despite that, I greatly enjoyed this story. I would definitely love to see how their relationship develops from here. It should be interesting to read about Pandora's trial during the next story. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 70 . 5/18/2020
Pandora doesn't seem too confident that he will be able to fulfill the promise he made to her. I can say that this does seem like a possibility, but at least it seems like he is going to be there for her, bad and good times. Perhaps there's something coming in the near future regarding what Pandora will be up to next. I really don't think this is her last story, I'm sure there's more that she has to do as Robin Hood. Perhaps Kamau can be there for her when she needs him most. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 69 . 5/13/2020
Simply spoken, without spoiling anything, Kamau seems to know what is best for Pandora. Now, I can't say that I agree with Kamau's decision, but I do respect it. If he is willing to do this for his woman, than his love for her must be very strong. And her love for him must have also grown stronger because of his decision. Great job
Katherine Queen chapter 68 . 5/13/2020
Simply spoken, without spoiling anything, wasn't expecting Kamau to do what he did. But, I do respect his reasoning for doing it. From this chapter alone, it merely proves just how much he loves her. Will be reading the next chapter very soon. Great job
Katherine Queen chapter 67 . 5/9/2020
Looks like he finally read the letter. I have a feeling that he isn't going to arrest her. He may at least go out of his way to understand her side of the story. But, I can't imagine him not talking her out of being Robin Hood. Or, perhaps there will be some sort of comfort for her from him. There is probably a couple scenarios where she doesn't go to jail, and a whole lot that will land her in prison. So maybe we can for the best, so their relationship isn't ruined by a potential mistake he could make. As long as he is willing to hear her side of the story and still be in love with her, even with all of her flaws, it will be a very magical moment. I look forward to reading the last few chapters of this story. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 66 . 5/8/2020
I can't believe that Pandora did that. I certainly understand why she'd do that, regarding the letter, her reasons for writing down her secret and hoping that Kamau would show her some kind of respect for when he read this. Regardless, of what may happen to her, I imagine that he will be very conflicted when he finds out who she really is. The only question is: Does he love her enough not to put her in jail? I hope their love is strong enough where he does talk to her like she said. Hopefully their love can persevere and that there will be something beautiful that happens when he actually reads the letter and discovers her secret. Very wonderful love affair. Great job.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/3/2020
It've been a while since last update. Is everything alright? Hope you're well.
Katherine Queen chapter 65 . 4/23/2020
I wasn't expecting Pandora to act like this, for her to find out why they were flirting with her at long last, it is very understandable why she would act like this. No woman should be treated like a toy, she should have been treated with more respect. Still, I am glad that Kamau was able to get through to her, even if it was not in the best of circumstances. It is truthful that he kept her from leaving for now, it is truthful that she now knows his true feelings for her, but does that mean that she will still stay with him with the pain still inside of her? I greatly look forward to reading the next chapter. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 64 . 4/19/2020
Okay, phew, so she didn't tell him about being Robin Hood. Still, the photos of her that the Landers had of her might not work in her favor. Still, should be interesting to see how that goes. Hopefully Dominic at least has the courtesy to do something with the incriminating Pandora pictures of her as Robin Hood, at least do that before presenting the evidence for the Landers. And if Mau ever finds out that she is Robin Hood, hopefully he is able to protect her in some way. Hopefully. Still, great chapter.

In all honesty, the previous chapter seemed like she told him that she was Robin Hood. She must not have been as forthcoming with that as I thought she was. I hope to read the next chapter soon. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 63 . 4/14/2020
So, I guess by the things at the beginning implies that Pandora officially told him that she was Robin Hood. Quite surprising that he had not been troubled by that. Quite surprising that he was still in love with her after telling him what she was up to over the years as Robin Hood. Even more surprising that him and her officially had gone through with the consummation of their love. I guess that simply proves how much the two of them have fallen in love with each other. Very romantic chapter. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 62 . 4/10/2020
It really seems crazy how Pandora is just dropping things like that, joking or not. The fact that she can drop all of these hints, these clues, about herself and Kamau still not being any the wiser is quite crazy. I am not sure where Pandora got all of her lying skills, but it could be because of the Landers or it could just be her personality. And I found that Maid Marian thing to be quite funny, because that is who Robin Hood falls in love with - at least, if Robin Hood were a man. Still, maybe that makes Kamau the Maid Marian in this scenario. Quite an interesting thought, I might say. Looking forward to reading more very soon. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 61 . 4/10/2020
The fact that Kamau would pardon her does say a lot about his personality. Still, it does make me wonder if he would still do it if he found out who she actually was. And if he pardoned her for her crimes, would he still be in love with her? That would be the question for the ages. Still, the mere fact that Kamau would pardon Pandora, perhaps there is some hope for the two of them in their romance. Looking forward to reading more. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 60 . 4/7/2020
The suspense of what could happen to Pandora if they find her blood in that Landers place, either by Kamau or the Landers themselves, I can only imagine what type of danger she is going to be in just because of her Robin Hood stuff. Wow, it is just so amazing by all of the suspense. Kamau maybe willing to lie for her regarding the whole mugging thing, but I am sure that it will be a lot harder to lie about her being the one and only Robin Hood. It will be quite suspenseful one that is known. Now, with there not being a whole lot of chapters left, it is likely that Kamau doesn't find out about her being Robin Hood in this story. At least, not right away. Hopefully we have something to look forward to in the closing chapters. Love this story so much. Keep the updates coming! Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 59 . 4/5/2020
For some reason, I expected the chapter to start with the investigation of the crime scene, because of the last chapter, but this works as well. The mere fact that Kamau elected to visit Pandora when she had just finished her Robin Hood things was quite noble of him. I still believe that there is a chance for Kamau and Pandora to have their happily ever after, maybe not this story, but certainly possible.

With Kamau connecting the dots, however, it should only be a matter of time before he finds out that Pandora is Robin Hood, and that, in my opinion, is where the drama of this story lies in wake. It really makes me wonder what Kamau is going to do, how he is going to respond, once he finds out the truth about Pandora. Is he going to act on his love for her and try to protect her from her current situation? Or is he going to act on his police job and arrest her? So many questions rolling in my head about this, there are just so many things going on in this story. It is just so insane considering the types of things that Pandora is going to have to deal with in the very near future.

Love the suspense from this story. Perhaps there will be something Kamau can do to help her. Wow, there is such conflict in this story. I hope that there will be something for Pandora that should be able to protect her in some way, even if it is from both Kamau and from the place she performed her Robin Hood duties. I guess we will have to see in the very near future. Love this story. Great job.
Katherine Queen chapter 58 . 4/3/2020
I greatly enjoyed the very small and short moment with Kamau and Pandora, very beautiful read. The one thing I wasn't expecting though was actually seeing Pandora's Robin Hood skills in action. And that was only because, until this chapter, it was only ever implied that she had done her Robin Hood duties. Except, for the one moment when she sneaked into Kamau's bed room of course. Still, very beautiful story. And actually seeing her in action was very cool. Hopefully she didn't leave any blood behind, but it would be very difficult to keep track of with what she was doing. If Kamau discovers her blood, however, one can only wonder what sort of conflicts are going to be awaiting Robin Hood/Pandora. I cannot wait to read the next chapter! Great job.
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