Reviews for Magpie of Excuses
Woedin chapter 1 . 4/1
Oh my what confessions flow from your protagonist in this piece your poetic vocabulary and range of imagery very much impress me. It's hard for me to even wrap my mind around writing as fluently as you're able to in a second language. I'd imagine it would take untenable hours of effort to come close to such a feat, and I fear I would yet fall short. So this talent of yours to, is notable, and I commend your multilingual skill set. Your lines in this offering do strike me as the thoughts and feelings of someone judging themselves over harshly, and who maybe suffering greatly from some form of melancholic depression. The bitter tears, obstructing ones path causing feelings of getting nowhere, and that way you phrased those emotions pulled at my heart, and aroused my empathy. And I could imagen it would in all who are so fortunate, to read your moving poem. Do count me a new, and ever growing fan of your work.
cassi crysta chapter 1 . 12/11/2019
i really enjoyed your vocabulary usage & imagery.