|Reviews for The Soma Script|
| Mislav chapter 1 . 12/14/2019
What an intense and interesting story. Great characterizations and excellent work with the descriptions. I liked how you started out with Durbar arriving at the inn, revealed his backstory, then went to action. The way they killed the hitmen was swift and brutal. Durbar reminded me of Indiana Jones, only with a Lovecraftian take on it. This part made me LOL: ""I am afraid I must decline," Durbar said. "Because I am a few steps from unconsciousness.""
I didn't expect Imran to take out the third gunman. The ending was unexpected and effective. I wonder what happened next. Did Durbar and Imran get away in time? But I think leaving it open-ended works. Keep it up. I always enjoy reading your stories.