Fantastic story! Really really enjoyed it.

Sweet ending. I was a little surprised who the video game match though.
~Sir Scott

That went pretty well. That beef roast sure sounded good.
~Sir Scott

Wow, Lulu's mother sure uptight. Good couple of chapters. I was afraid the story was finished.
~Sir Scott

So far things are working in their favor.
~Sir Scott

Roxie to the rescue. Good job.
~Sir Scott

Thanks for the chapter.
~Sir Scott

Pretty good chapter. Although, I think you switched Angela's name for Amelia during the middle part of the chapter.
~Sir Scott

I look forward to reading what I kind of plan they are going to make.
~Sir Scott

Great chapter. It's great to see the gang back together.
~Sir Scott

Thanks for the update.
~Sir Scott

A grilled cheese sandwich is worth crying over.
~Sir Scott

It's sweet that Lulu got a tattoo. I think I would be working on taking Ms. Adelaide out. A pillow over the face would do it.
~Sir Scott

Intriguing couple of characters. It was sad to see the gang go.
~Sir Scott

Thanks for the update. If I had to make a guess, I would say that Lulu isn't dying, but Ms. Adelaide is poisoning her just enough to keep her feeling bad.
~Sir Scott