Reviews for Jetpack Angel
Michal Claire chapter 7 . 1/24
A mystery is here! But oh no, damning evidence that indigo had a gun?
Michal Claire chapter 6 . 1/24
Please oh please don't be a cliche..! But be something interesting, strange maybe, but not predictable.
Michal Claire chapter 5 . 1/24
It sounds like things are starting, its been a pleasant origin story so far.
One thing bugs me about this chapter, almost at the beginning she says she had to delete something off of her flash drive. I can only assume it's a tiny 4gb or less drive which dates this quite a bit. But still, I'd think adding "tiny or "old before flash drive would help.
Michal Claire chapter 4 . 1/24
Great pace.
Michal Claire chapter 2 . 1/24
Very well done, interesting and quick thinking.
Note, typo in third to bottom paragraph, "a 4 am" I assume is meant to be "at 4 AM"
Michal Claire chapter 1 . 1/24
Very good first chapter here!
And here I am, who often has a large dislike for first person narratives, enjoy it very much.