Reviews for The Vignette Chronicles: Book 1
LostSoul009 chapter 5 . 2/15
Hmm interesting. How are they going to protect her.
LDF chapter 1 . 2/15
First off, I'd like to wish you congrats on your first foray into sci-fi!

Secondly, I hope my review helps you with your writing.

The tone is a bit...off...for someone revealing this huge government secret. Watch a few clips on YT on real life whistleblowers to get a feel of how it's done. They don't start by saying how oh, I was like you, I thought this was a thing for nerds, they go right into the misconception, their role in it, and what they've found. They don't have this narrative like they're telling you a story.
LostSoul009 chapter 4 . 1/18
He knows...
LostSoul009 chapter 3 . 1/17
He is not the only one who is intrigued.
LostSoul009 chapter 2 . 1/12
There should be more information, but I am intrigued by this girl, or is she some kind of AI?
DuramaSama chapter 1 . 1/10
I think this is a great setup you've got going. In my opinion, it does seem a bit vague, as far as the amount of information that's given, but a very entertaining prologue nevertheless! Can't wait for more