Reviews for Natural
The Puddlejumper chapter 1 . 6/8
... What is this? Not a story, certainly. Just 5 words. This isn't science fiction, it isn't even a story. Sorry if this sounds harsh, but it's really not a story...
Jamie Hazelwood chapter 1 . 2/12
Your story isn't science fiction, it doesn't even count as a story. I know this might be harsh, but I am only saying the truth and I hope you write longer stories.