Reviews for Blood Sash
CitrusChickadee chapter 1 . 1/22/2020
You definitely captured her conflict well here for the length of the story! It could be interesting to see the outcome of this, even if it's another short chapter, but this could also stand on its own well enough if you'd rather.
Clair Caprice chapter 1 . 1/21/2020
You did a great job capturing a lot in a few words. I would certainly be interested in seeing where you might take this story if you were to write more. You've definitely set up a intriguing premise and the stakes are high.