Reviews for thief
Woedin chapter 1 . 2/7
Both amazing and very erotic, the sensuality in your words as always, transfix the reader. ~Nicely done~
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/6
I like the imagery in the beginning. It was clear, that cigarette smoke and his blue eyes. As the piece progressed it felt more like a portion of a story than a poem. The passionate lovemaking was just that, lovemaking and not a metaphor for anything else. But then again that may just be me.
Constellations on my shoulder stood out for me as a line.
Keep writing!
Love,
Ata