Reviews for The Box |
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![]() ![]() it was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not to be overreacting but you're book is totally awesome. You're innate writing skill is what the world should witness. Try joining NovelStar's writing competition because why not? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... this is super good (I guess I'm dead), I wonder if it'll go any further... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, except for how itswitches to past tense in the middle of paragraph 6. It detracts from the immediacy of the story, and there doesn't seem to be a reason. If it were entirely present, it would be a spooky, haunting story, and if all past, it would feel like the "you" was a ghost. Mixed, it feels odd. Your descriptions feel very realistic! Will there be another chapter, or does "you" just die? |