|Reviews for The Box|
| Sticky chapter 1 . 10/14/2021
it was awesome
| HeyCharles chapter 1 . 4/19/2021
Not to be overreacting but you're book is totally awesome. You're innate writing skill is what the world should witness. Try joining NovelStar's writing competition because why not?
| anonymousfriend27 chapter 1 . 2/9/2020
Hmm... this is super good (I guess I'm dead), I wonder if it'll go any further...
| Alyce Reide chapter 1 . 1/24/2020
I like this, except for how itswitches to past tense in the middle of paragraph 6. It detracts from the immediacy of the story, and there doesn't seem to be a reason.
If it were entirely present, it would be a spooky, haunting story, and if all past, it would feel like the "you" was a ghost. Mixed, it feels odd.
Your descriptions feel very realistic! Will there be another chapter, or does "you" just die?