|Reviews for The Red Church|
| Cynthia Brent chapter 1 . 1/28
I think this is a great start! I loved how real the setting was and how much it comes from growing up near the ocean. Would farmers in England really shoot someone in the back without warning? I could totally see that happening in America but not in the UK! It would have been interesting if the narrator said he was a veteran and used to being this wet and that's why he doesn't give up. Oh and there were a couple of minor corrections, like the metal being half-rotted. Half rusted would be better!