|Reviews for Health Goals|
| LilyWoodlin chapter 1 . 8/25/2020
Ooh, Haiku are something that I wanna try. But I don't know where to start...
I loved the tone of the poem, not that I ever think about actively dieting though. But it is something that is all too familiar for myself.
| Dougie Zerts chapter 1 . 2/11/2020
Ah, it happens to the best of us!
| Ckh chapter 1 . 2/10/2020
You could always work off the weight :3 The tone kind of reminds me of the playful 5-7-5 haikus in Senryuu Shoujo.
| Synthey chapter 1 . 2/7/2020
I like the tone used here :)