|Reviews for Run Away|
| Synthey chapter 1 . 2/7
This puts the reader in the fear and urgency the protagonist must be feeling, I like it!
| atalantea chapter 1 . 2/6
I like the imagery and tension you built in the first few lines. I would have wanted a punchey ending but then again that's just me.
| CitrusChickadee chapter 1 . 2/6
The suspense and pressure in here are really well-caught! :)