Reviews for Run Away
Synthey chapter 1 . 2/7
This puts the reader in the fear and urgency the protagonist must be feeling, I like it!
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/6
I like the imagery and tension you built in the first few lines. I would have wanted a punchey ending but then again that's just me.
Keep writing!
CitrusChickadee chapter 1 . 2/6
The suspense and pressure in here are really well-caught! :)