Reviews for In the green sea
Woedin chapter 1 . 2/8
I truly love this poem, and all the connotations it evoked in me while I read this. I'm sure it had a personal meaning when you penned it, but this really spoke to me as well. What can I say other then I wish I'd written this poem, and add nicely done.
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/6
I like the effort to create rhythm and rhyme. I think there is a metaphor I am not exactly getting but you created cool omagery in some of your lines.

Keep writing!
Love,
Ata