Reviews for A grown up's love
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/10
This feels like a wedding vow and or a song. A promise of "No Matter What". So that came across clearly. Very romantic.
It felt like the last 3 lines of "Me" just explained the earlier lines which I think it didn't need to do. But then it may just be a matter of preference. Repetition is also a part of poetry after all.
Keep writing!