Reviews for Leaf
PhoenixArisen chapter 1 . 6/4/2020
You have such a magical way of words. To me the leaf is a symbol of adventure and freedom in this. The word choices really creates such a beautiful picture when I read it. Keep up with the excellent work! :)
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/12/2020
So... "tear" could mean two things like the ripping from or like the result of crying and both seem to fit. And both means something sad.
Somehow I feel like the Leaf is the personna. And it feels beaten by life. And how it is helpless.
Good haiku!
Keep writing!
So glad you posted!