|Reviews for Searching|
| Mislav chapter 1 . 4/24
Pretty creepy and interesting story. It kept me guessing until the end. Good work with the build-up and the atmosphere too. I liked the twist where Charlie was actually the one everyone was looking for. The reveal about flesh-eating alien parasites was both surprising and disturbing. The bone fragment was a sufficiently gory detail, I'm glad that was explained at the end. The mosquito was also a nice-and creepy-detail. I never liked those things LOL. Keep up the great work. I like short horror stories.