|Reviews for Gateway: Into the Oblivion|
| She Who Loves Pineapples II chapter 12 . 8/5
This story has gone in so many directions
| LittleAlchemist chapter 1 . 2/16
That's an interesting idea. To hook readers in it's usually best to have the action at the start and then get into introducing characters and day-to-day stuff. Shadow magic is cool, I like how Chance and Jaden have opposite personalities. Good luck with this.