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Loved this story! Great balance of tender romance, action, and erotica. Pacing and character development felt really natural too.

I very much like Zathrea, I feel like you will be able to go very far with your writing. Not many have the ease with words that you seem to have. Once again another marvelous chapter.

Once again it is very smoothly done, and very enjoyable. Again there are one or two misspelled words, but other than that it is fantastic.

It flows really well, I would recommend going over everything with a fine tooth comb to check spelling. There were just one or two that were spelled wrong. Other than that, I must say it is very remarkable.

Great chapter! As much as I despised Vasha, I'm actually liking that you left it open for him to make the choice to change his character for the better.

This story is sooo hot! Can’t wait to read more

Vasha is disgusting. Nyxen needs a he and Aria have some time together soon.

Vasha and Madria give me the creeps. Have no idea how you are going to get both Nyxen and Aria out of these predicaments? Glad they each have someone with them. Looking forward to more! Thank you.

Oh cmon!

Good job!

Yay! :)

Oh yuck! So glad she was able to get away. Well, hopefully. Neat twist for her former dancing troupe to be there.

Hi your story is so good to read i was kind of waiting for its next chapters. It was just breathtaking i love it. Hope you can finish this story so i could tell my bff about it. It was just so good. Have a nice day though thank you for sharing your story.

Thank you for this chapter! Loved it - but I don't want the storm to come...
Can't wait for the next chapter to come through