Reviews for stars
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/18
Love the star science theme and the magic you built with it. It felt like the beginnings of love.
I am not sure if it was deliberate but the piece felt like one run on sentence where it steals your breath and you are not sure what part is subject and predicate but somehow it all made sense. But then again is that not love?
I feel like the line with "mechanics palm" should have been mechanic palm but I may have just misread it.
Keep writing!
Love,
Ata