Reviews for The Getaway Bag
Jave Harron chapter 1 . 6/25
Heh. That poor fellow is about to be in for a real rough span. I enjoyed your stream of consciousness writing style. For some reason, thinking of Bret Easton Ellis. I like the second person pacing, as it reminds me of interactive fiction (Choose Your Own Adventure books and the like). I think some more detail, like allusions or metaphors, might improve the tension, although the end was worth it.
CitrusChickadee chapter 1 . 2/19/2020
The suspense leading up to the unexpected revelation was pretty great, ha. And then the last line completely twists things around again. Definitely an interesting buildup here.