Reviews for The Void
EggheadLuna chapter 3 . 7/8
I'm really happy that Neil was able to momentarily escape The Void and come to terms with his feelings. I really, really enjoyed reading this story! I hope you continue to write more!
EggheadLuna chapter 2 . 7/8
The ensuing fear of being devoured whole by nothingness. Great chapter! The character interactions in the dialogue have felt really real from the beginning, I especially felt the emotional impact in the conversation with Erin!
EggheadLuna chapter 1 . 7/8
The first chapter of this story is really poignant. The combination of horror with excruciating anguish reminded me of There Is No Year (Blake Butler). The terror in the last few paragraphs and the last sentence "...Neil fell, fell into The Void." It was really strong writing, keep up the good work!
Rollerskates chapter 2 . 4/7
Wow. This is AMAZING! Truly scary and with awesome writing. 10/10