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atalantea chapter 1 . 3/7
Aaaaaaaahhhh. A poem I really really like. I love the twist very much, of course, which the title gave a hint of. I love the little details you add in the poem that add such a layer or reality. It made the imagery more vivid. Engaging more than sight, the medicine and brushing teeth reminders you could hear and the coconut you could smell. It sets your piece apart and makes itndistinctly yours.

I love your metaphors here:

until you are wrapped
entirely around me, every thorn of my heart
caught in your skin, so that distance only
results in painful separation.

Keep writing!
Love,
Ata