Reviews for A Few Minor Adjustments
Michal Claire chapter 1 . 4/8/2020
Enjoyed the way it started “4th wall?”
Liked the normal/italicization/bold.
I think itd be nice and fun to see breaking 4th wall in common narration more often. Instead of just footnotes and/or author notes.)

I didn’t quite like when it started to spiral down that common path that I call (I’m just talking to myself so why does it matter.) but I notice that the last line is possibly open.

It somewhat reminds me of one of those “animator vs creation/drawing coming alive” sort of stories.

Hope something there was “constructive”