Reviews for deter mi nation
Woedin chapter 1 . 3/23
There is in fact a deep sense with your poem, of that determination.
But also a deceivers teary palsy, that blinds them to such rumination.
I also get a Steven King-esque vibe, in vain of Misery, in these verses.
Although it's possible that the paralytic prevaricator, is the antagonist.

This made me contemplate while reading, I always like that. ~Nice~