That was great if it had been a movie I would have jumped when the guy came at him. Great details so real to life

Very real could see how this could happen to any one. Was Good to see how he has good morals and would stand by them even if losing a job.

Really interesting Can place yourself vin this chapter with all the ups and downs to make a decision will it be the right one would this be what Bill would have wanted for him. What about his past Lots to think about and see where all the goes

Really good short but good. What will happen now to the guy did he really steal it himself

Very interesting can’t wait to see were this is going

Enjoyed seeing what is happening to conners and see what he will do now that he is on his own

So detailed great. Can’t wait to see what happens next

Oh no more trouble for a person how much will he have to go through. You really feel his pain and now he has to trust someone else

Very well written nice to see how he can do on his on what he has picked up from Bill too

Liked it but didn’t make clear why they killed him

Like the way it’s going. Can’t wait to see if the cop or Bulls guy learns more and if they figure out who he is

Liked how he is trying to change his life. Will he found out about his past ever what about the kid and gang

It is really a chill gripper and so many turns really keeps your interest