|Reviews for spilled ink|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14
This might have been a great second-person story but I was too distracted by the lack of any capitalization at the beginning of sentences to be aware while attempting to read.
| LeagionFear chapter 1 . 4/14
I'm a bit confused, this doesn't seem to add up with the description? Di they go through the hole oozing ink?
Very nice writing in second person, I attempt it ocationally for effect, you've done it really well here.